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Inconclusive endings: a cop out or a clever calculation?

The BBC adaptation of the Crimson Petal and the White does not provide a neatly-wrapped ending for audiences. Image: BBC.

The BBC’s adaptation of Michel Faber’s novel, The Crimson Petal and the White, recently came to its open-ended conclusion, and consequently spurred on passionate discussions on internet forums and the like about whether or not the ending should have wrapped up its myriad of loose ends. The Guardian’s episode by episode guide was teeming with comments about its unresolved ending: one Guardian commenter admitted that she was unsure of her feelings of its evasive ending as she’d hoped for complete ‘reassurance that the girls lived happily ever after”; however, another Guardian reader argued that the ending was indeed satisfying, ‘To conclude everything neatly and happily (for Sugar, Sophie and Agnes) would have seemed unrealistic and forced’.

The Crimson Petal and the White: the audience is left with questions about the future of the characters. Image: BBC

The Crimson Petal and the White tells the story of an intelligent and cunning Victorian prostitute’s determined ambition to rise above her circumstances. When her life becomes entangled with the perfume magnate, William Rackham, she does all she can to reach the top. Yet, by the final episode, self-absorbed William cruelly casts Sugar out into the streets. The BBC concluded its four part series with the red-haired protagonist staring into a miasma of murky, unfurling smoke, which suitably matched the equally murky, cloudy and unclear ending. The audience is left with an overwhelming bundle of unanswered questions. How does Sugar spend the remainder of her days – despondent or with renewed vigour? Where is her next destination? How will she survive? And these are just the questions concerning this particular character; there are also numerous points to be asked about a whole host of other characters: William and his daughter, Sophie, his wife, Agnes, Sugar’s mother, Mrs Castaway… However, despite all of these untied threads I find myself rather in favour of its surprising and mysterious ending. The lack of solid solutions in the finale increased the unnerving and shocking impact of the story. The Guardian commenter, earlier mentioned, yearned for a soppy, ‘happily ever after’, fairytale, but this isn’t a saccharine, sunshine style story. This is an intensely dark, harsh and gritty tale that needed to end with a similarly unsettling avalanche of emotions. If the hauntingly gloomy production had ended tidily there wouldn’t have been the incredibly subtle and superb symbolism of Sugar opening up a brand new book, her pen poised over a blank page in eager anticipation of a writing a new narrative, and thus beginning a new chapter of her life.

This has led me to think of other tales that have also resisted the idea of an ending with every query explained and every problem eradicated. Henry James’ intriguing novella, The Turn of the Screw, is one such notable (and may I add successful) example of a story ending with an enigmatic eeriness. A young, governess becomes increasingly obsessed and petrified that malicious, ghostly spirits are intent on stealing the innocence of her young charges away. This piece of fiction again ends with uncertainty; this time about whether the governess’ wild spectral theories are indeed valid or whether these are the governess’ insane imaginings. Thus, the most crucial and interesting aspect of the novel is analyzing the psychology of the governess’ emotional turmoil and mental chaos. By creating an ambiguous ending James shows us how complex, deep and intricate are psychological states of minds really are. What is more, James’ bizarre masterpiece capsizes notions of the traditional realist narrative’s preference for orderliness, and the detective novel’s format of perplexingly weird activity being solved in its final pages. Instead of deciphering the mystery, James creates yet further mysteries in his own novella’s closure. Surely if someone decides to challenge conventional ideas of a story’s structure, to do something different and more unusual, the artist deserves to be applauded? Another example is Herman Melville’s lesser known work, Pierre or The Ambiguities, which I assert is the work of a colossal genius. The central character of the plot, Pierre Glendinning, meets a captivating lady, Isabel Banford, who claims to be his half-sister. They embark on an utterly destructive and incestuous relationship, which is absolutely gripping to read. Isabel’s character remains a hugely bewildering puzzle right up to the last page. Is she an excessively domineering, scheming embodiment of evil controlling Pierre with an assortment of tricks and sorcery or is she genuinely his innocent, tremulous sister who needs comforting protection? Melville has adventurously decided to avoid a direct, straightforward and simple story, and makes his work a sequence of riddles, encouraging readers to become active participants of the narrative. Melville invites readers to a stimulating, thought-provoking challenge, as each meandering sentence is yet another point to rigorously ponder and speculate over.

Don’t get me wrong I don’t necessarily think that it is absolutely imperative that all stories should contain a swarm of question marks hovering over the final moments of every narrative. But I do insist that sometimes inconclusive endings can be regarded as wise and carefully thought out artistic decisions.

Kimberley Chen

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A Week of Whales

I’ve been haunted by whales this week. It all started with Dave from my writing group trying to list songs about whales, which spawned an eclectic playlist. Then I turned on the TV to be confronted by a whale being dissected.  (They’d just gouged out something called the glove finger – a bit of the ear shaped like a pointing hand in a glove.) Then the next day I wandered into the brilliant Judd Books in Bloomsbury, picked up a collection of Ted Hughes’s poems for children and found his beautiful Moon-Whales poem. Three whales in a row must be a sign, so I set out on a quest for whales in literature.

I started with Ted Hughes’s whales, which swim across the surface of the moon, ‘lifting the moon’s skin / Like a muscle’. It’s a beautifully visual poem, its whales huge, mysterious and geologically slow. The poem’s repeated ‘oo’ and ‘m’ sounds echo the whales’ calls.

whale2Sometimes they plunge deep
Under the moon’s plains
Making their magnetic way
Through the moon’s interior metals
Sending the astronaut’s instruments scatty.

Next, I went back to an early example of whale-lit: Jonah’s Biblical encounter, which already contains all the motifs of the genre – swallowing, fate, death, rebirth and existential angst. In the whale’s stomach for three days and nights, Jonah shouts at God to let him out. “Out of the belly of hell cried I, and thou heardest my voice.” God obliges, after Jonah makes some rash promises about keeping the faith. The whale vomits him up and then sadly disappears from the story, which concentrates on the frankly less exciting Jonah.

Then I listened to some whale folk-songs. Once people worked out how to build boats big enough to catch whales, but not quite big enough to be safe from being capsized by them, they started singing about the perils and pleasures of whaling. One of the best-known whaling songs is the Greenland Whale Fisheries, first sung in the 18th Century and covered loudly by The Pogues on our playlist. I love the rhythm of the lyrics, even without the music.

The harpoon struck and the line played out,
With a single flourish of his tail,
He capsized the boat and we lost five men,
And we did not catch that whale, brave boys,
And we did not catch that whale.

Next, I read the story Mocha Dick by J. N. Reynolds. Now, I already knew that Herman Melville based Moby Dick on a real incident – the wreck of the whaleship Essex in 1819. (The First Mate, Own Chase, published an account of the disaster, also a brilliantly horrific read.) But I’d always assumed that the characters were fictional, any resemblance to persons living or dead coincidental. Turns out I was wrong – Moby himself was based on a real whale, Mocha Dick, who roamed the Pacific in the early 1800s. Like Moby, Mocha was white, and notorious for capsizing boats with his tail. Mocha wore a jaunty headdress of barnacles, which apparently gave him a ‘rugged’ appearance, which he accessorised with 20 broken-off harpoons sticking out of his back.

Reynold’s story is about the final slaughter of Mocha Dick by Nantucket ‘blubber-hunters’, which you can’t help feeling is a bit of a waste of a good whale. (I guess that’s what Melville thought too.) Reading it, I tended to side with the whale – “… in impotent rage, he reared his immense blunt head, covered with barnacles, high above the surge; while his jaws fell together with a crash that almost made me shiver; then the upper outline of his vast form was dimly seen, gliding amidst showers of sparkling spray; while streaks of crimson on the white surf that boiled in his track, told that the shaft had been driven home.” The description of the ‘cutting in’ of the whale’s carcass after the kill, and the 100 barrels of clear oil and gruesomely euphemistic ‘head-matter’ collected, reminded me unpleasantly of that TV whale dissection.

Then I dabbled briefly with D.H. Lawrence’s poem Whales Weep Not, which is about sex and obsession, the whales rolling through the sea and joyfully mating. It didn’t really do it for me, until I found a recording of Leonard Nimoy reading it to a whale-song backing, which made my week. (His intimate whisper of “there they blow, there they blow” has to be listened to.) It’s on the playlist too.

Then I remembered the marvellous opening to Rudyard Kipling’s Just So story, How the Whale Got His Throat“In the sea, once upon a time, O my Best Beloved, there was a Whale, and he ate fishes. He ate the starfish and the garfish, and the crab and the dab, and the plaice and the dace, and the skate and his mate, and the mackereel and the pickereel, and the really truly twirly-whirly eel.”

Kipling follows the biblical theme of being swallowed alive by a whale – the man the whale swallows, who is a person of “infinite-resource-and-sagacity”, uses his broken boat and suspenders (“do not forget the suspenders”) to give the whale its sieve-like throat.

But searching for Kipling brought me right back to Ted Hughes– he also tried his hand at a creation story about the whale in his children’s collection How the Whale Became, which I’d forgotten about entirely. Reading it again, the images were as odd as they were when I was a kid – a whale growing as a plant in God’s back garden and being pulled up by the root and thrown in the sea because he’s too big. His anguish at his fate is still rather upsetting. “’Help, help!” cried Whale-Wort. “I shall drown! Please let me come back on land where I can sleep.’”

That brought my week of literary whales to a close, with the feeling that whales are paradoxes: gentle, but with the power to crush up a boat, monstrously ugly but breathtakingly beautiful. They’re so inscrutable, insatiable and different from us that they make versatile symbols for everything from fate and obsession to the power and mystery nature itself.

You can listen to our whale song playlist here, if you’re so inclined.

Emily Cleaver

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